I tried to correct mistakes that my classmates did on their blog sendding them comments.
Consequently, you can find in this post these comments.
On Ludivine’s blog :
Hi Ludivine,
I think “in order to have a interessanter search” is wrong. Maybe, you may write “in order to have a more interessant search”.
On Nicolas’ blog :
Hi Nicolas,
I send you this post just to notify you that you use which in sted of who in the following sentence :
“Those videos were made by the same man, Bas de Baar,- which – is a software project manager”
On Laetitia’s blog :
Hi Laetitia,
I think the following sentence is wrong : “I decide if this video is or isn’t correspond in that I want.”
Accord to me, you would write “I decide if this video correspond or not to my demands”.
On Trang’s blog :
Hi triple T !
I found a mistake in the following sentence :
“In this one, we can see how Ben Burtt made the sound design of the movie WALL-E”
May you write WALL-E’s sound design instead of “the sound design of the movie WALL-E” ?
I think I have a mistake in my question 
On Vincent H.’s blog :
“They have the responsibility of the planning, execution, and closing of any project,”
Does “They have for responsibility to plan, execute and to close any project” is more correct than what you wrote ?
Hey little Ice-Cream !!
There’s not a lot to correct on your blog, so… I’ll leave you there !!
See you soon
xxx
Comment by Gabrielle — October 30, 2008 @ 2:56 pm
I think you can use the word “instead” in your sentence “May you write WALL-E’s sound design in sted of “the sound design of the movie WALL-E” ?”.
It’s may be more correct, but it’s only my trying to resolve you mistake. I don’t find much of it.
That all the mistake that I see because I make a lot of mistakes myself and I don’t rectify my own.
Comment by Gregoire — November 1, 2008 @ 10:41 am
Hi Ikram,
It’s me again, and I’m back with your mistakes
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Ok, First point, “I try”, you would have meant “I tried” I guess. Because it’s a past action. I think you finished your homework.
Second point, I think “blog” should be plural => “blogs”. Because each classmate have his blog.
Last point, an orthographic mistake, “sendding” doesn’t contain two letters “d”, just one.
Cordialy,
Nico
Comment by max2817 — November 3, 2008 @ 6:12 pm